Contemporary Poetry Review

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Sonny Williams

Lands Away

 

Comets, Stars, the Moon, and Mars, Space Poems and Paintings by Douglas Florian. Harcourt, Inc., 56 pgs., 2007.  

Mahalia Mouse Goes to College, by John Lithgow, Illustrated by Igor Oleynikov. Simon and Schuster, 40 pgs., 2007. 

Good Sports: Rhymes About Running, Jumping, Throwing, and More by Jack Prelutsky, Illustrated by Chris Raschka. Alfred A. Knopf, 40 pgs., 2007.  

Mucumber McGee and the Half-Eaten Hot Dog by Patrick Loehr. Katherine Tegen Books, 32 pgs., 2007. 


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          The Fort Worth Central Public Library was opened in 1978 and sits at the intersection of 3rd and Taylor. It is an unassuming, neoclassical edifice, a building with two stories above ground and one underground level. The windows are tinted black to protect its holdings and its readers from the brutal Texas sun, though the library is now overshadowed by the towering structures that have sprung up downtown. It is not nearly as grand or austere as some city libraries; yet it is entirely accessible and possesses the classic features one would expect from such an institution.

          On some Saturdays, my daughter and I will make the hour trip from our exurban home to visit this library, especially if the weather is bad, which in our part of the world includes virtually every kind of meteorological extreme. We’ll take the backroads, driving by thickets of bois d’arc, pecan, and mesquite, coasting slowly by the paint horses grazing in the open pastures, then up the rise to stop at the ranch of llama and alpaca. We’ll roll down the windows to hear the large black llama, a particularly lively individual, hiss and spit at us, who will then chase us down the fence-line, hopping over sagebrush and bitterweed, as we drive away. The road takes us past herds of cows, buffalo and longhorns that lounge in the pipe-fenced prairie, and leads finally to I-35, a rather flat and featureless 30-mile straight shot to downtown. 

While we have numerous books at our home, I derive much enjoyment from our excursion to the library. Even though the advent of Internet access, cyberspace, e-libraries, online catalogs, and downloadable books is quite convenient and wonderful, nothing can replace physically making the trip to an actual location and wandering through the labyrinth of books, pulling something strange and new from the shelves. For us, it is a little adventure. Books have always been a part of my own life, and I want to share what I think to be a pleasurable, enriching experience, where one can lose oneself in other worlds. As Emily Dickinson once wrote: “There is no frigate like a book / To take us lands away.” 

A generous portion of the library has been devoted to youth and children’s books. One enters the area through a columned portal that invites its visitors to pass under a rainbow and into the brightly decorated space. It is a veritable playland of books, games, puppet theaters, and child-sized castles. I, personally, enjoy visiting the children’s area. Here, I can eagerly return to the deliciously wicked verses of Roald Dahl, the brooding drawings of Edward Gory, or experience the wildly fantastic artwork in picture books that my daughter digs from the stacks. A certain freedom and imagination lives here that is quite different from the other sections of the library. 

When it comes to children’s poetry, however, that freedom quickly dissipates from the controversy over what our children should be reading. A great fear is spread by some teachers, scholars, and critics in their countless reports and educational studies that our children are not only not reading, but when they do read, they are reading the wrong books. And the argument gets quite heated since, after all, the decisions that are made will affect our children’s education, or, more to the point, their ability to score well on district-wide proficiency tests that enable schools to receive government funding. 

Critics and scholars such as Glenna Sloan and Michael Benton question if there is such a genre as children’s poetry or if, in fact, any real poetry exists in today’s abundance of children’s verse. Sloan, in her informative essay “But Is It Poetry?” published in Children’s Literature in Education (2001), says, “Children’s poetry as a genre is by no means universally respected. Furthermore, the greater literary world treats children’s poets as nonentities.” Though the field of children’s verse is growing (consumer spending on all children’s books has exceeded $2.1 billion), and the list of writers lengthening, Sloan questions: “In today’s abundance of children’s verse, is there genuine poetry?” 

How does one define children’s poetry? What are the criteria? What constitutes “genuine” poetry? This has proven as difficult as defining poetry, or art, in general. Is it as Neil Philip writes in the New Oxford Book of Children’s Verse (1996): “A true children’s poem is distinguished by clarity of thought, language and rhythm”? According to Philip, a certain “directness” must reside in order for it to be called a children’s poem. Unfortunately, “clear-eyed economy” is insufficient in defining children’s poetry. One must consider all that nonsense verse, the most famous of which is “Jabberwocky.” Children are constantly making up their own rhymes and nutty songs that entail no reason whatsoever. D. H. Lawrence, whose poetry is included in numerous children’s anthologies, said, “The essential quality of poetry is that it makes a new effort of attention and ‘discovers’ a new world within the known world.” While this definition certainly fulfills the criterion one expects of any poem, a sense of wonder and fresh, sensuous perceptions, it is still a vague statement that could be applied to virtually any art form. 

This difficulty of defining children’s poetry usually encompasses the debate as to whether children should be reading only “great,” or classic, poets, or should they even bother reading successful contemporary practitioners of the genre, such as X. J. Kennedy, Jack Prelutsky, Shel Silverstein, Aileen Fisher, Eloise Greenfield, et al. Many anthologies of children’s verse include such “classic” authors as William Blake, Emily Dickinson, Christina Rossetti, Robert Frost, and Langston Hughes, while avoiding living children’s poets. This seems like a reincarnation of the quarrel of the ancients and the moderns of the seventeenth century, though contemporary critics will not even allow poets the avenue of imitation, preferring instead to shun them completely. Funny enough, as time passes, those who were once contemporary authors slide into the category of classic authors, making them eligible for inclusion. Perhaps we prefer our artists safely tucked away in their tombs before we regard their work with any seriousness. 

Janine Certo, in her essay “Cold plums and the old men in the water: Let children read and write ‘great’ poetry,” published in Reading Teacher (2004), admits Shel Silverstein “was instrumental in focusing my own interest in poetry as a child.” Though Certo teaches both “great” poets of the past alongside contemporary poets, she spends the majority of the essay validating the use of great poetry with children. 

Michael Driscoll’s anthology A Child’s Introduction to Poetry (2003) seems aimed more at adults rather than children, whose modus operandi seems to favor a force-feeding of the classics. Sharon Gill, in her essay “The forgotten genre of children’s poetry,” published in Reading Teacher (2007), writes that she is disappointed by the absence of poems written by twentieth-century children’s poets in Driscoll’s anthology. “Driscoll’s collection teaches children that poems are written by ‘great poets,’ which can only be understood and evaluated by academics, whose job it is to tell the rest of us a poem’s meaning.” Calling himself “Professor Driscoll” will probably do little to endear him to his youthful readers. Though he provides good poems by William Blake and Christina Rossetti, he includes eight lines from Homer’s 15,000-plus line Iliad, eight lines that would make no sense to a child, and possibly few adults. Furthermore, the book is cluttered with illustrations, explanations, and definitions that bury the poems like flowers in an overgrown, weed-filled garden. 

As with many children’s anthologies and school curriculums, emphasis is placed on analysis, in which an academic examination of the poems is encouraged, instead of allowing the child to derive some joy and meaning for herself, because, as you know, this poetry stuff is dire business. X. J. Kennedy refreshingly notes in his anthology Knock at a Star: A Child’s Introduction to Poetry (Revised Edition 1999), edited with his wife, Dorothy, “There is something wrong with (as poet Elizabeth Bishop once said) ‘making poetry monstrous or boring and proceeding to talk the very life out of it.’” 

The Kennedys’ collection has a balance of “great” poets with contemporary poets. He includes probably the most famous, and most well-represented, poet, Anonymous, along with the likes of “greats” like Wordsworth, Dickinson, Rossetti, Tennyson, Stevenson, Carroll, Frost and de la Mare, Edward Lear, Ogden Nash, Charles Causley, Richard Wilbur, and Jane Kenyon, as well as more recent authors such as Jack Prelutsky, Sandra Cisneros, Aileen Fisher, and Ted Kooser. To my mind, this seems the smart way to go about it. The Kennedys are in line with Sloan, writing, “We gathered poems that we have found to amuse, delight, and engage children in third grade through sixth. We have tried to leave out what children ‘ought’ to like.” Sloan believes poems chosen for children should be “suitable to their needs and desires.” Though the poetic needs and desires of a child are difficult to ascertain, is it detrimental for a child to read an “unclassic” poem? Shouldn’t children experience a wide variety of literature, and certainly, some of those needs and desires will include a little junk. 

Michael Benton, in his “Essay Review: Poetry for Children—Prepositions and Possessives,” reminds us what W. H. Auden once said in “Rhyme and Reason” (1973): 

While there are good poems which children cannot appreciate because they deal with experiences which they are too young to have known, there are no good poems that children appreciate which lose their appeal when they grow up. 

According to Sloan, “To test whether poetry written for children is ‘real’ is to examine it, not in relation to sophisticated lyrics for grownups, but in light of the traditions of children’s oral lore,” which includes riddles, jump-roping songs, tongue twisters, jingles, taunts, and the like. However, I think Douglas Florian’s definition is as good as any: “Poetry is not black and white. It is more like the gray and purple area that connects all things we live in.” 

Poetry covers the whole range of human experience, and children’s literature should be part of that experience, one that is inclusive of all its possibilities, rather than limited by academic definitions and school curriculums. Sloan says that those who deny children’s literature a place probably haven’t read much of it. Probably true. And for those sad-sack draconians who would deny children’s poetry, let them read Ezra Pound. Fortunately, we have authors who continue to write good, memorable children’s verse that might encourage children to read, and to continue to discover literature through their adult years, and who also remind us adults of the giddy pleasures of nonsense and wordplay, providing us an opportunity to board their frigates and briefly take us lands away. As I attempt to read one of the “classic” poems to my daughter, she impatiently surveys the library and spies a book across the room displayed with a bright yellow duck on the cover. I read her this one instead. It’s not very good, I think, as I turn the pages, clunking rhymes and stumbling rhythms, but she laughs at the comical situations and facial expressions, and when we are finished, she scampers off to find another, perfectly pleased with the book. Which was the whole point of the trip. 

Douglas Florian, author and illustrator, has created more than 30 picture books. Florian was an illustrator for newspapers and magazines, who said that he turned to children’s books because it allows him “a lot of creative freedom.” His best-known titles, Insectlopedia and Mammalabilia, are noted for their brilliant pictures. Though Florian’s artwork delightfully accompanies his poetry, it does not supplant it. His poetry is able to stand alone, and Florian’s wit and wordplay evokes such poets as Ogden Nash and Edward Lear. He eschews the literal and mundane, favoring the whimsical, spelling words incorrectly, using bad grammar, and exaggerating. He knows that children are capable of reveling in the absurd and nonsensical, though even so-called nonsense poems often make perfect sense. His bouncy rhythms and surprising rhymes makes his poems excellent to read aloud: 

Just when you think you know the boa,

There’s moa and moa and moa and moa. 

His zoological cleverness involves more than just rhythm and rhyme; the subject matter is grounded with real insight to the animals he is describing: 

Did you know the ocean’s oysters

Sometimes change from girls to boysters? 

With Comets, Stars, the Moon, and Mars, Florian has traded in his microscope for a telescope, moving his lens from the microcosmic to the macrocosmic, featuring short poems on the various bodies and interstellar matter of our solar system and universe. For the illustrations, Florian used brown paper bags, primed white with gesso, with gouache, collage, and rubber stamps, giving the pages colorful brilliance and a luminous texture. The die-cut pages add planetary dimension, and the paintings are child-like, with informative descriptions, such as indicating the Great Dark Spot on Neptune while also playfully including a cutout of the Latin god’s face and his trident. 

The poem “A Galaxy” is written in spiral form, and the other galaxies that inhabit the universe are stamped in their proper shapes: barred, barred spiral, egg-shaped, flattened, elliptical, irregular, ball-shaped, and spiral. The planets are stamped with mythological creatures and humorous references, like Mercury, which consists of a paper cutout of the car. There are poems on solar systems, planets, comets, and black holes, not bursting with vivid imagery, but all which are informative to the budding astronomer, providing facts within the rhythmical, rhyming poems. 

With the moon, for instance, he explains the satellite’s phases, which, I fear, many adults no longer know. 

Moon 

A New moon isn’t really new,

It’s merely somewhat dark to view.

 

A Crescent moon may seem to smile,

Gladly back after a while.

 

A Half moon is half-dark, half light.

At sunset look due south to sight.

 

A Full moon is a sight to see,

Circular in geometry.

 

After full, the moon will wane

Night by night, then start again.

He also makes commentary on up-to-date scientific decisions, such as the planet Pluto being demoted: 

Pluto

 

Pluto was a planet.

But now it doesn’t pass.

Pluto was a planet.

They say it’s lacking mass.

Pluto was a planet.

Pluto was admired.

Pluto was a planet.

Till one day it got fired. 

The poem hops along happily in trimeters, and the illustration of the planet contains words that are both indicative of the problem of classifying Pluto and that are humorous: “debris?” “planetoid?” “ice dwarf?” “asteroid?” “hard place?” “dog?” etc. 

Florian enjoys wordplay, as he turns his verse on a single word in the poem “Saturn”: 

Saturn’s rings turn round Saturn.

Its moons turn round it, too.

Saturn, by turns, turns round the sun.

Saturning through and through.

With such minimalist poems, it can sometimes be difficult to keep the strings tightly strung, and some fall a bit flat, the language somewhat lazy, creating rather ordinary and forgetful verse, like this one about our own planet: 

Two-thirds water.

One-third land.

Valleys deep.

Mountains grand.

Sky of blue.

Clouds of gray.

Life here, too—

Think I’ll stay. 

The line “Life here, too” is the important element, since, so far, no other bodies in the universe have been found to contain life, making our planet unique, but the eight-line poem lacks any striking image or use of language to impress such a fact. However, the advantage of a brief text is to keep children’s attention focused, and it can prepare them for challenges. The final poem, “The Great Beyond,” challenges kids’ vocabulary: 

If you flew past Pluto

There’s more that you’d see:

A planetoid, Sedna,

Found 2003,

And objects in orbit

Known as planetesimals

(Sometimes so small,

They’re measured in decimals).

Great galaxies spin,

While bright comets race.

And I’d tell you more,

But I’ve run out of space.  

The book ends with a galactic glossary, for those who would like further definitions and explanations of the objects of the poems. As a funny topper, the author has painted himself where the author photo should reside, a green, pointed-eared alien with red eyes. This is a lovely book for young novice stargazers, and in an age of video games, TV, and the ever-increasing dampening of starlight by our cities, it may encourage parents to join their children and rediscover the wonders of the night sky. Florian’s book was chosen by Horn Book Magazine as a best poetry book for 2007. 

I’m unsure why celebrities feel they can write children’s books. From Madonna to Spike Lee, Katie Couric to Jay Leno, the number of stars conquering the covers of kids’ books continues to grow. Children’s book author Jon Scieszka said, “Everybody, and I mean everybody, thinks they can write children’s book.” Perhaps it’s the deceptive simplicity of the poetry, or the sentiment of writing a children’s book for one’s own children that leads these stars astray. Though these folks have money and access to the Today show to promote their mawkish scribblings, Scieszka says children’s book authors have a secret weapon, the children. Children are the most honest and most brutal critics in the world, and they do not care who you are, just about the pictures and words on the page. 

The famed actor John Lithgow threw his hat in the children’s book ring some time ago and has written several successful picture books, and, for his latest, he has returned to a mainstay of children’s storytelling, the use of a baby animal as protagonist. Whether it be a duckling, a mouse, or a rabbit, I find the use of rodents, birds, and other diminutive creatures to be hackneyed. But they continue to delight children. 

Mahalia Mouse Goes to College was read by Lithgow as part of his keynote address at Harvard’s commencement in 2005. A CD of the reading is included, and Lithgow gives an energetic performance and provides the pauses and emphasis where appropriate for a dramatic rendering. It’s entertaining to hear the reactions from the crowd, and my daughter enjoyed this storytelling while we followed along in the book. Told in a variable ballad meter, Lithgow often uses sophisticated turns of phrases and vocabulary to tell the tale of a mouse who discovers the world of learning and student life at Harvard. 

The skies of September were bursting with rain,

Pelting the old dormitory.

It filled every gutter and choked every drain.

                                                (Chapter 1 of Mahalia’s story.) 

So begins the story of Mahalia and her life with her family beneath Dunster House, a Harvard dormitory. Mahalia must leave her family to gather food (the father’s away on some unknown errand), and enters the downpour wearing a small bit of newspaper as protection. Mahalia hides in a hall by the dorm of the cafeteria and smells some cheese coming from an open backpack lying on the floor. As she explores its interior, she is zipped shut inside and transported to a classroom, until it is “opened up to the light”:      

A room unlike any she’d been in before,

       Full of rows upon rows of young students.

       In terror, she beats a retreat to the door,

       Repenting her recent imprudence. 

But Mahalia doesn’t leave and becomes entranced by the wild-haired professor’s lecture, who is rendered as if he is giving a speech at a rally, and she decides to take the class. As to her previous mission to gather food for her starving family, Lithgow solves this problem of responsibility by choosing to have Mahalia’s mother appear in a dream and assuage Mahalia’s guilt at having abandoned her family to attend college by telling her “Be happy and follow your heart!” While this is interpreted as so much Emersonian self-reliance, I found it more like youthful self-indulgence. In any case, Mahalia attends college where she dabbles in art, history, math, and zoology, until she finally receives her degree. News of her graduation reaches her parents, and at the commencement, there is a joyous reunion. 

Mahalia is drawn as a soft and vulnerable creature, with large eyes, and is quite cute wrapped in her newspaper. Oleynikov uses a dark palette, with digitally enhanced gouache illustrations. The perspective from Mahalia’s point of view inside the backpack, complete with the metal teeth of the zipper, peering into the classroom as from a mouth, is a lovely touch, and emphasizes her loneliness and vulnerability. Though the commentary on lab fees and university life will be lost on children, the clever rhymes and quick pace make the story a good read. The dark moments with Mahalia alone in the backpack and separated from her parents creates an anxiety with which children can identify, and the happy reunion at the end will bring a sigh of relief. 

Jack Prelutsky is the first U.S. children’s poet laureate and is well-deserving of the post. Children don’t really need a poet laureate, and the nomination seems more an appointment fulfilling some politico’s agenda, but Prelutsky is a good representative for contemporary children’s poets. He has been writing children’s poetry for about 40 years, frequently in traditional forms, employing puns, alliteration and wordplay that is exciting and inventive and best when read aloud. Unfortunately, Good Sports: Rhymes About Running, Jumping, Throwing, and More is a dull collection. For the inventor of the “Duhduhs” and purple orangutans and pigs in stilts, the poems in Good Sports are flat, with none of the playful and witty language for which Prelutsky has been so celebrated in such mischievous and clever collections as It’s Raining Pigs and Noodles and A Pizza the Size of the Sun. Take, for instance, these lines from “The Apathetic Thwo,” for whom “There’s nothing that I want to do / I have a dreamy point of view,” or “Mister Pfister Gristletwist,” the “preeminent contortionist / exhibiting for all to see / my peerless elasticity.” 

The illustrations by Chris Raschka are of watercolor and ink, and they have a kinetic energy, capturing the motion of playing children, but they do little to enliven the verse: 

I’m standing at home,

And count’s three two.

A fastball is coming,

And here’s what I’ll do—

I’ll swing at that ball,

And I’ll smack it so hard,

I’ll send that ball sailing

Clear out of the yard. 

Or: 

I’m a gymnast,

I can vault,

Swing and spring

And somersault,

Even balance

On the beam—

Some day soon

I’ll make the team. 

I much prefer the Prelutsky of nonsense verse and playful exaggerations, whose altered perspectives make his poetry so much fun, such as in “Is Traffic Jam Delectable?” Though appearing as nonsense, the verse makes perfect sense, and asks the literal questions a child very well might ask. 

Is traffic jam delectable,

does jelly fish in lakes,

does tree bark make a racket,

does the clamor rattle snakes? 

I recommend searching for the classic Prelutsky titles. 

Mucumber McGee and the Half-Eaten Hot Dog, written and illustrated by Patrick Loehr, his first children’s book, is reminiscent of the artwork of Tim Burton and Edward Gorey, two artists who have provided me with hours of sinister enjoyment. The author’s bio is written in meter and rhyme, and we learn Loehr “grew up to oversee / serious business. / He spends his spare time / making pictures of weirdness.” 

The book is ominous and dark, drawn in gothic purples, blacks, and eerie greens, with a large stone house and a pale, thin boy in a black suit who has a pet lizard. An attractive book with dark spreads, I was immediately drawn to the odd Mucumber, a peculiar Johnny Depp-style character. The story begins:                  

In a rainy old village

down by the sea,

Lived a young boy

            named Mucumber McGee.

Mucumber’s plight is that he can’t find anything to eat. The emaciated Mucumber is so hungry that he scours the pantries and cupboards, until he finally spies something in the back of the icebox: 

But wait—a hot dog!—

            albeit quite old . . .

and wrinkled and lumpy

            and lonely and cold. 

Though not exactly a classic gross-out, it’s enough for the narrator to ask: 

            But if you were that hungry,

            what would YOU do? 

So Mucumber eats half of the odious frankfurter, until his sister warns him of the dangers of consuming raw meat and even includes a diagram of how his insides will react. But the macabre story’s verse often falls into awkward lines, which is distracting and disrupts the music and pace, especially when read aloud. Loehr has a tin ear for meter, which is disappointing, as in the first and third lines of this stanza: 

You’ll be sickened, you’ll be paralyzed,

you’ll be ill enough to cry.

Your insides will turn upside down!

it’s reported you might die. 

So Mucumber resigns himself to death, and spends the rest of the book melodramatically waiting for the end to come, until his mother comes home and tells him that it’s OK, the hot dogs are precooked. And the moral: 

Don’t listen to others,

like sisters or brothers.

Next time you are hungry . . .

just go ask your mothers. 

The book has lovely dark details, such as the gothic figures in the portraits that hang on the walls are eating turkey legs and pancakes and the like. If Loehr can get his rhythms right, I look forward to more of his darkly humorous cautionary tales.

 


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