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Unguided and Apart: the Achievement of W.D.
Not for Specialists: New and Selected Poems by W.D. Snodgrass. BOA Editions, 2006. |
Have
you boned up on your Snodgrass? There’s no time like the present. But it
may take a while. There’s not really a typical Snodgrass poem that will
immediately give a sense of the man and the work. Nor does any
characteristic form stand out, although form is clearly important to the
writer. Many of Snodgrass’s poems are characterized by what you might
call exuberant experimentation, as forms and even meters are invented for
the occasion. The emotional tones range from tenderly poignant to wickedly
satirical. The subjects span art, nature, relationships, academic
politics, and the Götterdämmerung
of the Third Reich. And yet over time readers come to locate and respond
to the distinct and appealing personality behind some extraordinary poems.
To a considerable degree, Snodgrass writes about himself. Poets can hardly
avoid entering their poems, but often they employ a variety of disguises.
Snodgrass, usually working without a mask, resembles Lowell, who put
himself, his parents, and his wives and lovers into poems suffused with
familial and conjugal strife, but he does not partake of Lowell’s mania.
These poems convey the suffering that attends abandonment by a loved one,
marital breakup, and the loss of a child through divorce. Without naming
names, they offer convincing details of sexual trespass and sometimes
duplicity. Readers can be forgiven for seeing them as autobiographical.
Such frank displays of personal loss and anguish place Snodgrass among the
“confessional” poets, although he remains so balanced and good-humored
that some may feel he lacks the neuroses necessary to qualify.
But these amiable qualities take no toll on his poems or his acumen. And
they can be deceptive. For to retain balance in the face of the blows of
fortune, the betrayals of erstwhile loves, one must have recourse to an
irony that only the willfully naïve would mistake for simple good humor.
Consider “A Valediction,” addressed to a woman who has left the poet
for another man: Since his sharp sight has taught you To think your own thoughts and to see What cramped horizons my arms brought you,
Turn then and go free.
The bitter irony in every line borders on sarcasm, but it does not descend
to raillery. The poem’s ostensible good wishes for a new life are
artfully designed to look like curses until the sentence is completed—
May this new love leave you Your own being; may your bright rebirth Prove treacherous, change then, and deceive you
Never on this earth. —so
that the curse, the intended statement, appears to be (but is not really)
negated by the second half of the sentence. Thus the sad sarcasm prevails
while the cancelled curse still echoes. The effect is to clarify the
speaker’s pain while arousing in the reader something close to pity for
a woman seen as moving blindly from a relationship in which she might have
been happy to one in which she cannot be.
Although Snodgrass was a formalist long before the term became common
currency, he has remained a relentless experimenter. More than most
contemporary poets, he blends into his work what one might call found
poetry—most often phrases from the letters, diaries, or spoken words of
those he is writing about, but sometimes even the rhythms of utterances,
including some that originated with the great horned owls in upstate New
York.[1]
These are incorporated in poems as the wren or the robin incorporates bits
of string into its nest: the structure is the poet’s, but the exogenous
phrases give life and veracity to the work.
The poem called “Van Gogh: ‘The Starry Night,’” for example, is
daubed with quotations from the painter’s letters and diaries, and it
builds from a restrained description of the sleeping village below to the
mad ecstasies of the cartwheeling galaxies overhead—and then declines
again, as if the painter’s (and the poet’s) intelligence had reined in
the mania, till it settles in Van Gogh’s ambiguous last words, which
Snodgrass in his notes translates as “This is the way to go” or
“I’d like to die like this” or “I want to go home.”
Again, in the poems from The Fuehrer
Bunker (1977, 1995), Snodgrass includes written and spoken phrases
from Hitler, from Wagner’s operas, and from an early astrology manual.
Poems in the voice of Albert Speer, Hitler’s architect, are shaped into
typographic triangles that form architectural patterns. Those in the voice
of Heinrich Himmler are printed on graph paper with all words in capitals,
one letter to a square, fitting into rigid rectangles with dots between
each word, and conveying a graphic image of a mind like the bed of
Procrustes. If these poems succeed, and I believe they do, it is because
they manage to combine a sense of the deranged minds behind the horror
with the poet’s uninsistent sense of reality: an awareness that things
will not fit in Himmler’s boxes or Speer’s triangles; an understanding
that, in remarking “Casualties? But that is what / The young men are
there for!” Hitler has lost touch (if he ever was in touch) with a
fundamental reality. And even readers braced for Hitler’s monstrosity
may be jolted by Snodgrass’s rendering of Magda Goebbels’ ersatz
nursery songs as, with Soviet troops closing in, she feeds cyanide to
children with a spoon.
Not that the poet’s horror is focused solely on the most notorious
villains of prior generations. He is willing and able to draw disturbing
parallels between the early days of the Nazi party and the recent history
of the United States. In “The Discreet Advantages of a Reichstag Fire”
he notes the usefulness of a manmade catastrophe in focusing a nation’s
rage: Nothing but willed injuries can secure us all
In rancor dead-set against an alien folk
or nation. The
poem proceeds to describe how civil liberties can be progressively
curtailed in the name of “Protection of the People and the State.” And
it concludes: You may be forced to jail or execute Some you’ve conquered but who still thwart your commands; There’s one triumph can console you: in your homeland
Your whim is law and your least wish
absolute. In our age that thinks of poetry as lyric, when it thinks of poetry at all, people are wary of fierce political statements in verse. I suppose there is some danger that we will be bombarded by dueling poetic firebrands as much as we have been by political interest groups on the airwaves. But like all such endeavors, political satire in verse can be done well or badly, and here it is done very well.
Snodgrass’s experiments also run to imitations and parodies. This
retrospective includes selections from Kinder
Capers, his book of poems for children, illustrated by his friend
DeLoss McGraw. In addition to more traditional works (this section
contains the only sonnets in the collection), there is a rather madcap
imitation of Stevens’ “The Man with the Blue Guitar,” called “The
Drunken Minstrel Rags His Bluegrass Lute.” The general ideas of the
Stevens poem reappear here in off-key hipster diction: A man who plays when days are green May sing absurd but not obscene … Go get your lute a coat of paint;
Jazz these things up the way they ain’t.
A little of this goes a long way—and in general the children’s poems
feel slightly forced and less than inspired—something that can rarely be
said of Snodgrass’s grown-up writing.
But these missteps are atypical and stem, I believe, from a naturally
exuberant, irrepressible quality in the writer, one that produces poems on
all sorts of occasions, not just those calling for gravitas. Formally
experimental or not, Snodgrass’s best poems are frank, deeply felt, and
fearless. Virtually no subject is off limits. The poet writes of his
marriages, their disintegrations, and their aftermaths. He writes of
trysts in a featureless motel. He describes an evening spent with a couple
and their children—an evening made exquisitely awkward by the reality
that he and the woman of the couple are lovers. And, most famously, he
catalogues the torment, over years, of living apart from his loved
daughter as a result of separation and divorce: the “heart’s
needle,” the “drop that brings a man to the ground.”
It was Heart’s Needle that
made Snodgrass’s reputation when it was published in 1959. An
anachronism at the time, in that it hewed to meter and dexterous (if
somewhat permissive) rhyme, it was also quite contemporary in its
willingness to expose personal details in a public forum: I tugged your hand, once, when I hated Things less: a mere game dislocated The radius of your wrist.
Love’s wishbone, child . . .
The episode fits the poem, but it also convinces the reader that it really
happened, was not simply invented to make a poem vivid. And because of
that, it retains its power to bring the reader up short, however often he
rereads the poem.
Yet what finally carries the day, and sets Snodgrass apart from such
confessional poets as Plath and Lowell, is the tenderness and generosity
of feeling evident in every poem. These qualities, sometimes frowned upon
by those who believe a poet should be tough-minded to avoid
sentimentality, are handled with great skill, as in his lines describing
his daughter: I lift you on your swing, and must shove you away, see you return again, drive you off again, then stand quiet till you come. You, though you climb higher, farther from me, longer,
will fall back to me stronger. The
passage has the character of an Elizabethan conceit, in the manner of
Donne, except that it feels less contrived, more personal. But to achieve
that feeling takes art.
That art involves considerable rational control, a control that, on the
evidence of these poems, has not always come easy for the writer. Beneath
a colloquial exterior lies a complex mind: the poet knows where he is
going, but he is sometimes careless of leaving signposts. For example, the
poem called “Fourth of July” from Remains
cannot be descried on one reading. The second stanza tells us, “She
stopped [died] a year ago today.” We don’t yet know who “she” is.
We see her bedroom and her personal effects—“Her bedside asthma pipe,
the glasses whose / Correction no one else will take.” But we must
travel through ten more stanzas to arrive at the final one, where we
finally learn, “It is an evil, stupid joke. / My wife is pregnant; my
sister’s in her grave.” Then we can and must go back and reread the
poem to fit its details into our new knowledge.
Another poem, “After Experience Taught Me,” interweaves two vastly
different narratives, couplet by couplet, as if they were read
antiphonally by two antagonists. One is a detailed set of instructions for
maiming an adversary by gouging his eyes and ripping his face off. It is
counterpointed by a series of ponderous meditative unrhymed couplets: Seeing that none of the things I feared contain In themselves anything either good or bad . . . Excepting only in the effect they had Upon my mind, I resolved to inquire . . . Whether there might be something whose discovery
Would grant me supreme unending
happiness. The
slightly fatuous and otherworldly quality of these lines of course invites
desecration, which the anti-poem supplies: Take the first two fingers of this hand; Fork them out—kind of a “V for Victory”— . . . And jam them into the eyes of your enemy.
You have to do this hard. Very hard.
It is possible this strange amalgam represents self-criticism, either
personal or literary, by Snodgrass, or that it embodies post-traumatic
stress, but its shocking tone does not really move or enlighten this
reader, nor does the forced yoking of the narratives offer illumination.
Such a poem could be called an example of the fearlessness I referred to
earlier, but I mean something different by the term: the willingness to
put one’s own humiliation and debasement on public display, boldly and
without apology. In “The Last Time,” Snodgrass tells of a moment
late in a previous marriage when his wife momentarily forgets her new
infatuation and treats her husband with affection. “My breath failed me.
I thought / It might all come back yet . . .” But then she turns back to
the “tall young man in whom you’d shown, / In front of all our
friends, such clear delight,” throws her arms around him, kisses him,
“and then you / Said you were ready and we went along.”
Poems like this are by no means unprecedented in English literature, but
they are not easy to write, and when written with such dramatic immediacy
they evoke in readers complex emotions of sympathy and awkwardness, as if
we were present and forced to witness, with deep discomfort, a crucial
moment of betrayal.
Summing up: we are in the presence of a vigorous and subtle poet
possessing, in his best poems, great technical control and a disarming
ability to make engaging art of some harrowing experiences and reversals
of fortune. When we step back and survey his work as a whole, what can we
say?
A volume of new and selected poems published in advanced years (Snodgrass
is 80) and arranged chronologically tempts a reader to see the poet’s
wending life in the waystations he has erected—especially when he holds
so little back. Viewed from that vantage, such a volume is essentially
tragic: it opens with promise and ends facing demise. If the writer
retains his powers of observation and expression into old age, then his
life is his book, and even grace and wit (which Snodgrass has in great
plenty) cannot long elate us.
We can see the arc of the life as we go from an early poem like “These
Trees Stand,” with its slightly self-mocking but still confident
refrain—“Snodgrass is walking through the universe”—to a poem of
middle life, describing his return to “A Locked House” that, untended
for two years, has kept the possessions he and his former wife once
shared. Noting that the house has not been tampered with, he observes
ruefully, The theft And vandalism were our own.
Maybe we should have known.
In due course we come to “Packing Up the Lute,” in which the poet says
to the lute, which is a real instrument as well as a metaphor, “You /
Were just too fine a vice to last.” And because the lute is metaphor
too, and the “vice” is art and talent and life itself, and because the
poem is written in an infectious meter, with an informal, intimate diction
that one might use with a child or a lover, we experience a wrenching of
the heart, something that happens now and then when an exceptional poem
accosts us.
Among the earlier poems, even the most successful, a conventional poetic
surface competes with the poet’s starker vision. At times coherence
suffers. Riding the long, careening sentences, a reader must sometimes
hang on for dear life. The “Hearts Needle” sequence begins with a
single sentence snaking through six stanzas. For all its beauties of
detail, the rational content of this sentence will escape most readers. It
can be diagrammed, but until it is thus reduced to a schematic form, it is
likely to remain a texture of fleeting though indelible moments (“Your
mind a landscape of new snow,” “the lean foot / Of the weasel
tracking”) rather than an intellectual proposition.
In the later poems these excesses are considerably chastened. By the time
we come to “Viewing the Body” (from Remains
(1970, 1985)), we find the path notably straighter. Three sentences are
deployed over four stanzas; each is comprehensible without effort, though
the second gets by without a main verb, and the third is decisive: Today at last she holds All eyes and a place of honor Till the obscene red folds
Of satin close down on her. The
poem closes with the finality of that coffin. Some
twenty years later, Snodgrass composed the succinct sentences of “Autumn
Variations,” aided now by rhymed tetrameter couplets: The evening grossbeak on the lawn Will turn his back on us, move on With his wide family and those friends We thought were ours. That’s how it ends. If it’s been good, be glad it’s been; It won’t be. The cold shoulder’s in. We must make do, once summer’s done,
With our fair weather friends or none. Allusion
is replaced by aphorism. Metaphor still has power, but the surface sheen
is gone, revealing the stark, no-nonsense world that underlies it all.
And finally there is a relaxed style that can handle anything, imbuing
even occasional poems with multiple meanings, as in these lines
celebrating the eighty-fifth birthday of the singer Hugues Cuenod: . . . just a dry, white, unmannered Mask tone with the bel canto breathing That carried your song’s deep impulse truly From mouth to nerve ends like a fine, rich Pouilly.
Why not just say: one voice for all
seasons. Why not, indeed? Snodgrass’s voice still serves. The poet who made a bigger splash in his youth (winning a Pulitzer with his first book) than he did in later years has grown in complexity of feeling and in power. The selection represented in this book should establish him as one of the major poets of the late twentieth century, and a model for younger writers pursuing a once-again fashionable formalism in the twenty-first.
[1] An aside: thirty years ago when Snodgrass published “Owls” in X.J. Kennedy’s magazine Counter/Measures, the contributors’ notes indicated that he had actually notated the calls of the owls and would provide them on request. I requested and I received: Snodgrass really had recorded the prosody of the owls’ call—a prosody that became the basis for his poem.
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